I drink neither a cup of coffee nor a cup of tea.
1. I drink / I don't drink
2. a cup of coffee / coffee; a cup of tea / tea
3. No errors
4. I don't drink coffee. I don't drink tea, either.
5. 8
When Hebrew reached the Red Sea, they saw the big sea in front of them. Theopposite side of the sea was a lot of miles ahead. Looking backward, theyfound that Egyptian soldiers were approaching them. They became scaredbecause they had no place to go.
1. No errors
2. Hebrew / the Hebrews
they saw the big sea / they saw the water (better not to repeat
"sea")
a lot of miles ahead / many miles away
3. No errors
4. When the Hebrews
reached the Red Sea, they saw the wide water in front of them. It was many
miles to the other side. They turned around and saw the Egyptian soldiers
coming after them. They were afraid: there was nowhere to go.
5. 8 points
It make the classics in China that when passing in field of squashes if footwear came off wouldn't put on it's with get down.
1) squashes/ squash; came off/ comes
off
2) it makes the classics in China
that/ A classic proverb in China teaches that; passing in/ passing through;
footwear/ shoe; wouldn't put on it's/ mustn't put it back on
3) no errors
4) A classic proverb in China teaches
that, when passing through a field of squash if your shoe comes off yo u
mustn't put it back on.
5) 6 points
Some schools in Tokyo canceled the opening
ceremony based on the government’s announcement that the number of H1N1 swine
flu-stricken patients had achieved the standard to recognize the flu as a
pandemic.
1. No errors
2. schools in Tokyo canceled the opening ceremony / schools in Tokyo canceled
their opening ceremony
3. No errors
4. can't really say "the number ( ... ) had achieved the standard" /
there were enough cases of H1N1 swine flu for it to be considered a pandemic
5. 9 points
The opinion that Japanese cannot use English is accepted in the world. We should contrive to improve their opinion.
1. No errors
2. contrive / strive
3. No errors
4. I want to disprove the theory that Japanese people can't learn English.
5. 9 points
Stock market was soard because of that news.
1. was soard / soared
2. Stock market / The stock market
3. soard / soared
4. The stock market soared in response to that news.
5. 7 points
B148 その商品は冷凍状態にて送って欲しいのですが。
Could you send me the product in a frozen condition?
1. No errors
2. in a frozen condition / frozen
3. No errors
4. We would like the product sent frozen.
5. 9 points
B272 長期金利の上昇による住宅市場の減速などを背景に今後の成長率は鈍化する見込みである
Because of slowdown in housing market by increase in long-term
interest rates, future glowing rate will slow down.
1)
Because of slowdown/ Because of the slowdown; by increase in long-term interest rates/ due to the increase in
long-term interest rates,
2)
glowing rate/growth rate
3)
No error
4)
Because of the slump in the housing market due to increased long-term interest
rates, future growth rate is going to slow down.
5) 7
【X003】日本は４つの大きな島と300以上の小さな島で成り立っています。最も大きな島は本州と呼ばれています。東京は日本の首都で本州にあります。
日本で最も高い山は富士山です。富士山の頂上からは東京の街を見ることが出来ます。他の大きな町は大阪、名古屋、札幌、福岡などです。
これらの町夫々には有名な神社や歴史的な場所があります。
Japan consists of four large islands and above three hundreds small islands. The
largest island is called Honsyu.
Tokyo which is Japanese capital located on Honsyu.The highest mountain Mt.Fuji in Japan.
We can see Tokyo's city from the top of Mt.Fuji.Other large cities is Osaka,Nagoya,Sapporo,Fukuoka
and so on.
Each of these cities have the famous temples and the historical places.
1. Tokyo which is Japanese capital located / Tokyo, which is the capital, is located
Other large cities is / Other large cities are Each of these cities have
/ Each of these cities has
2. above three hundreds / more than three hundred The highest mountain
Mt. Fuji in Japan / The highest mountain in Japan is Mt. Fuji
Tokyo's city / Tokyo the famous temples and the historical places / famous
temples and historical places
3. Honsyu / Honshu
4. Japan consists of four large islands and more than 300 small islands. The
largest island is called Honshu.
Tokyo is the capital of Japan and it is on the island of Honshu.The tallest mountain in Japan is Mount Fuji.
From the top of the Mt.Fuji, you can see the city of Tokyo.Other large
cities are Osaka, Nagoya,
Sapporo and Fukuoka, etc. Each of these cities has famous shrines and historical
places.
5. 6 points
多くのアメリカ人が飲酒問題を抱えています。
Those who drink alcoholic beverage too much are destroying their lives. If you continue to drink too much for years,
you will shorten your life-span for ten years. Research shows that a lot of Americans have drinking problem.
1. drink alcoholic beverage too much / drink alcoholic beverages too much, drink too many alcoholic beverages
a lot of Americans have drinking problem / a lot of Americans have a drinking problem, have drinking problems
2. shorten your lifespan for ten years / shorten your lifespan by ten years
3. No errors
4. People who drink too much are destroying their lives. When alcohol abuse is continued for many years, it can reduce one's life span by ten years.
Studies show that many Americans have a drinking problem.
5. 8 points
そのリズムは純粋にアフリカのものです。
The jazz is American music originated in sacred spiritual song, work song, and the experience of African-American
slaves. Its melody and chord areEuropean in nature, but its rhythm is purely African.
1. Jazz is American music originated / Jazz is American music which originated
2. The jazz / Jazz spiritual song, work song / spiritual songs, work songs experience / experiences
everything plural... melodies and chords
3. No errors
4. Jazz is an American music that grew out of sacred spirituals and work songs, as well as the experiences of negro slaves.
Although its melodies and harmonies are essentially European, its rythms are pure African.
5. 7 points
There is a debate that has discussed for 200 years on Yamataikoku, an old country in Japan, was whether in the center of Japan or in Kitakyushu.
According to the center theory, Yamataikoku was the precursor of the Yamato Imperial Court.
1. has discussed / has been discussed
an old country / an old city, an old town
Japan, was whether in the center. The debate was about whether Tamataikoku was in the center
2. No errors
3. No errors
4. There is a 200-year-old contention about whether the Yamatai kingdom was located in the central part of Japan or in norther Kyushu.
A central location would mean that the Yamatai kingdom was a predecessor of the Yamato dynasty.
5. 6 points
Fコース 今こうして浪人生活をしていると、人間は一人で生きていくことができないということがよくわかります。
勉強は当然として、人とのコミュニケーションも必要だと思いました。また、運動も大事だと思いました。
毎日、いすに座っていると、体力が低下し、勉強に支障がでます。なので、私は週に一度、走っています
When I lead a vagrant life now, then I well understand that human being can't live alone.
It is natural to study, but I think that it is necessary to communicate
with someone.
Also, I think that it is important to exercise. If you san on the chair
everyday, you would fall in strengths
and prevent your studying. Therefore, I run once a week.
1. No errors
2. now, then I / now, I ["then" changes this story to the past,
but you want to stay in present]
human being can't / human beings can't
If you san on the chair everyday / If you sit in a chair all day
you would fall in strengths / you will become week
prevent your studying / and unable to study
3. No errors
4. While I lead a rather aimless life now, I have come to understand that humans cannot live alone.
It's natural to study, but it's important to communicate with others, too.
It is also important to exercise. If you spend all day sitting in
a chair, you will become weak,
and this, too, will affect your studies. Therefore, I run once a
week.
5. 7 points
D62 彼はひどい経済状態で、誰も頼る人がいない(早稲田)
He is awful economic conditions, and he don't have person who relies on．
1. He is awful economic conditions / He is in an awful economic situation
he doesn't have person / he doesn't have a person, he doesn't have anyone
2. who relies on / to rely on
3. No errors
4. He is in a very
poor financial situation and he has no one to turn to.
5. 7 points
(K212) その機械が誰のものか何のためなのかがわからなかった
I don't know whose machine it is and what it is doing for.
1) what it is doing for/what it is for.
2) No error
3) No error
4) I have no idea whose machine it is and
what it is for.
5) ８
Will you go to Germany with your husband together?
1. No errors
2. with your husband together / with your husband (already includes the meaning of "together")
3. No errors
4. Will you go and your husband go to Germany together?
5. 9 points
Y827 I would like to educate the children
who has talents for painting pictures.
1. children who has / children who have
2. the children / children (not a specific group of children with talent, in
general, children with talent)
talents / talent
3. No errors
4. I would like to find some children who have a talent for painting, and give
them some training.
5. 7 points
2A032】新空港建設をめぐって住民投票を求める多くの署名が集まった。 The people ,who worry to be held a referendum on building the new airport , collect many signatures. 1) The people ,who worry to be held a referendum on building the new airport , collect many signatures /Many people who want a referendum for the construction of a new airport have gathered their signature as an expression of support2) No error3) No error 4) Several signatures were gathered to support the referendum for the construction of the new airport.5) 7
Please have anything worthwile, and leave those junks.
1. No errors
2. those junks / that junk (uncountable)
have / take sounds more natural
3. worthwile / worthwhile
4. Please take all the valuable things with you, and leave those odds and ends behind.
5. 7 points
